Promotions to higher levels should be from within a company and not to new person from outside . Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of giving promotion to old workers rather than giving to outsiders

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always debatable and it has become more controversial with some people claiming that it is beneficial

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others reject

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controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational.

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elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of

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trend and

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,

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and foremost reason behind

this

is that present employees of an organisation have more experience than

ousiders

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outsiders

which results in

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in sales of a company.

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, saves

company's

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time and money because hiring new candidates for

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position

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is a complicated and

time consuming

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process which requires

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of money in advertising the job vacancy on various websites

whereas

, in order to promote an old worker authorities only need to check past achievements of a worker and need to provide less training than a new hire.

Consequently

, it benefits the organisation financially. Probing ahead, another major reason in

this

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regard

is that it is immoral to ignore hardworking individuals who

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been contributing to

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of an institute

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a long time period.

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, experienced staff

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more loyal and passionate towards a job and

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high expectations from a workplace.

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, social media

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revealed an incident in Canada in which a person who was two years away from

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age was fired from a job in order to hire

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worker and

this

issue

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made many people upset.

Therefore

, big institutes should respect the hard work of their workers. To recapitulate,

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arguments

aforementioned above, one can reach

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conclusion that the benefits and reasons are indeed too great to ignore.