The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.

The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.
The provided pie chart depicts information about the usage of
water
for different kinds of purposes in Australia in 2004, and the bar chart
also
illustrates the amount of
water
used in homes.
Overall
, a significant proportion of
water
was used for Residential houses,
while
a large amount of
this
was consumed in gardens and bathrooms.
To begin
, the first glance is enough to see the majority part of the
water
was used for the purpose of household (57%). Consumption for residential flats is 13% which is 3% higher than business. Approximately, one in ten was used for Industry and business,
while
a minority part of it was taken for government and other reasons, 6% and 3% respectively. The main consumption source was mentioned as residential
water
usage, the biggest part of it was consumed for the purpose of bathrooms and gardens, around 30%. A fifth of
this
was used for washing clothes and 5% less than
this
in toilets. The least was taken by kitchens ( one in ten).
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