The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Pie chart)
The pie charts below provide information on what type of activities, divided into 6 types,
was
done by working Correct subject-verb agreement
were
adults
during the day in a specific country in both 1958 and 2008.
Viewing from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it was clearly evident that whether it was either in 1958 or 2008, the Linking Words
adults
spent most of their Use synonyms
time
doing their jobs because they had the responsibility to do so. Use synonyms
However
, in 1958, they were less likely to spend their Linking Words
time
travelling to work, Use synonyms
while
in 2008 the Linking Words
adults
were least likely to go out or do hobbies in their leisure Use synonyms
time
.
Looking in more detail, in both 1958 and 2008, most Use synonyms
adults
spent their free Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
by
working in their office which was Change preposition
apply
at
33% in 1958 and 42% in 2008, and it can be seen that as the working hours increased, the number of sleeping hours that they got decreased by almost a Change preposition
apply
third,
which were at 32% in 1958 and 25% in 2008. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
time
they need to travel to work grew significantly in 2008 (8%), which was 4 times as much as it was in 1958 (2%).
Use synonyms
Additionally
, outside of sleep and work-related activities, in 1958, the majority of their Linking Words
time
was spent Use synonyms
by
hanging out with either friends or family, which was at 19%, but Change preposition
apply
this
number dropped sharply in 2008 to only Linking Words
at
6%. Change preposition
apply
This
might be explained by the fact that there was a rise in the percentage of relaxing Linking Words
time
that they got in their free Use synonyms
time
from 8% to 13% Use synonyms
although
the rise was not immense. Linking Words
Lastly
, there was no change at all in terms of the Linking Words
time
that they spent on their hobbies.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, time with synonyms.
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