The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014
The line graph compares the amount of percentage of New Zealand students learning
other language
over a period of 8 years between 2006-2014.
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another language
other languages
Overall
,during this
eight year
period,French remained the biggest Add a hyphen
eight-year
percent
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percentage
on
learning new skills,with all four other countries receiving much less on them.
In 2006 Chinese had the least amount of percentage,Change preposition
of
while
German
had about 15 percent.Replace the word
Germany
However
,by 2014, this
nation was in the least stage and considerably more number was in Chinese than German.
As can be seen from the graph, in initial
years the Japanese and French Correct article usage
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obtain
about as much as each other.Wrong verb form
obtained
Furthermore
the Japanese steadily declined.The period between 2010 and 2014 saw a shrap
growth in in 2014 the Chinese rocketed as much Correct your spelling
sharp
percent
as they did in 2006.Change the spelling
per cent
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