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The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014
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The line graph compares the amount of percentage of New Zealand students learning
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 over a period of 8 years between 2006-2014.
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,during
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eight year
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 period,French remained the biggest
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on
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 learning new skills,with all four other countries receiving much less on them. In 2006 Chinese had the least amount of percentage,
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German
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Germany
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 had about 15 percent.
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,by 2014,
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 nation was in the least stage and considerably more number was in Chinese than German. As can be seen from the graph, in
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 years the Japanese and French
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 about as much as each other.
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 the Japanese steadily declined.The period between 2010 and 2014 saw a
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 growth in in 2014 the Chinese rocketed as much
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per cent
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 as they did in 2006.
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