in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities . Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public translport.

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witnessed a booming

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modes and particularly in

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and

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opponents argue that the government should allocate the majority of the national budget for developing

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, others contend that improving

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and infrastructure are considered the most pressing concerns for citizens. In my opinion, I believe that enhancing

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is as imperative as

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enhancements. At the outset, it is indisputable that private vehicles are the most common

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mode in the daily mobilities.

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. Having

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and vehicles renders the public amenities

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more accessible for individuals,

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houses, schools, theatres, recreational places and factories, all most often rely on

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roads

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modes.

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the government to assign a major sum of money for refining and

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public safety, avoiding

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congestions and potential incidents.

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the community.

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, there is no denying that the presence of

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plays a pivotal role over the course of history.

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is considered the most easiest and convenient

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long distance

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destinations.

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, recently, surveys have proven that the availability of

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is the fastest, more comfortable and feasible

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for passengers from upper Egypt toward other cities.

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they can arrive within hours by train, they

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around two days by private car. Another

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to be considered

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the electric subway

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reducing

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congestion in other

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modes.

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, the government should significantly allocate amounts for developing

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.

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road vehicles play a vital role in the transition between

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to spend sums of amount

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constructing and restoring

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public safety.

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, commuters between regions have a profound reliance on

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. it is recommended to fixate an immense attention to both of them