Write a letter to invite an English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter: Include some background about the film Explain why it might interest him/her Suggest arrangements for watching the film

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Dear Mike, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing

this

letter to invite you to watch

new

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a new

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indian

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Indian

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movie

, which is based on the history and culture of India. I

belive

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believe

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you would love the

movie

"Rang de Basanti".

This

movie

showcases the landscapes and scenic beauty of

country

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the country

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.The

movie

shows

the

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deeper knowledge of

history

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the history

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of India.The director has done a great job and it shows the

hardwork

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hard work

he has done.The music of the

movie

also

extraodinary

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extraordinary

. I have already made the arrangements to watch the

movie

in the Menoka bar on

21st-October

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21st October

around 9PM. I would

also

like to extend the offer to take you to the famous grill and bar to have Chicken tikka .

Furthermore

, I would love to continue

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apply

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our conversation on

movie

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movies

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and food. I am looking forward to hearing from you and

enjyoing

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enjoying

the film with you. Regards Pallavi

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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however
although
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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

155 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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