The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates how

sugar

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is produced from

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cane and there are 7 steps during the whole process. At the very beginning,

the

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apply

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sugar

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canes

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cane

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come

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comes

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from

a

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apply

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vegetation that needs 12 to 18 months

for growing

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to grow

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.

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, the farmers harvest the matured canes by huge farming machines or cut

it

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them

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down

mannually

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manually

. In terms of the former half of

process

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the process

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, the cut-down

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canes

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cane

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will be put into a crusher,

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and transferring

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transferring

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transferred

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to

juice

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. To make sure the

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can be

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is

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pure and clean, workers pour

them

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it

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into

limestone

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a limestone

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filter. Meanwhile, the purified

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will

dripped

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drip

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into a big evaporator which is operated by heat, and the

juice

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will become syrup. After the syrup is manufactured, the next stage is using the centrifuge to

seperate

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separate

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and crystals from it. In the

last

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step, the

seperated

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separated

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will be sent into a large container for drying and cooling. Eventually, the whole process will be accomplished and the

sugar

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will be ready for consumption and selling.