The Table Shows the Proportion of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the Information by Selecting and Reporting the Main Points and Give Comparisons Where Relevant.

The Table Shows the Proportion of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the Information by Selecting and Reporting the Main Points and Give Comparisons Where Relevant.
The percentage-based data in the table shows how many
students
attended each type of secondary school in the years 2000, 2005, and 2009.
Overall
, The majority of attendees at first are free to attend. Controlled
schools
and
community
and specialized
schools
have the lowest attendance rates.
While
the majority of
students
in the final time frame attended
community
schools
. Few
students
, though, attended specialized
schools
. To start with, 12% of
students
were enrolled in
community
schools
in 2000.
Additionally
, the same proportion of
students
went to
specialty
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speciality
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schools
. The greatest attendance in 2000 was at 24% for grammar
schools
and above 50% for voluntary managed
schools
.
Additionally
, 11% and 19% of
students
, respectively, attended specialized
schools
and grammar
schools
. The percentages of
community
and voluntary managed
schools
were highest in 2005, at 32% and 38%, respectively.
Additionally
, just 10% of
students
attended specialised
schools
in 2009, which was 2% fewer than grammar
schools
. In 2010,
community
schools
had an all-time high student attendance of 58%,
while
voluntary-controlled
schools
showed a sharp declining trend and finished up with only 20%.
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