The Table Shows the Proportion of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the Information by Selecting and Reporting the Main Points and Give Comparisons Where Relevant.
The percentage-based data in the table shows how many
students
attended each type of secondary school in the years 2000, 2005, and 2009.
Overall
, The majority of attendees at first are free to attend. Controlled schools
and community
and specialized schools
have the lowest attendance rates. While
the majority of students
in the final time frame attended community
schools
. Few students
, though, attended specialized schools
.
To start with, 12% of students
were enrolled in community
schools
in 2000. Additionally
, the same proportion of students
went to specialty
Change the spelling
speciality
schools
. The greatest attendance in 2000 was at 24% for grammar schools
and above 50% for voluntary managed schools
. Additionally
, 11% and 19% of students
, respectively, attended specialized schools
and grammar schools
.
The percentages of community
and voluntary managed schools
were highest in 2005, at 32% and 38%, respectively.
Additionally
, just 10% of students
attended specialised schools
in 2009, which was 2% fewer than grammar schools
. In 2010, community
schools
had an all-time high student attendance of 58%, while
voluntary-controlled schools
showed a sharp declining trend and finished up with only 20%.Submitted by ktebaeplease on
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