The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
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The provided diagram demonstrates the process of
genarating
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generating
electricity from
geothermal
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the geothermal
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power plant.
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, it is evident that the
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main factor to
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generate
energy in that process is the
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of
water
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over the five steps. As can be seen, the first step starts with pumping cold
water
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downward the inlet shaft as long as around 4.5 km depth. Followed by the
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step
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of the injection well,
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water
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penetrates into
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hot rocks and
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to a
high temperature
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degree in a geothermal zone. Turning to the third step, which is the production well, where the hot
water
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pumps out
thoughout
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through
an outlet shaft toward the condenser in the surface. The main function
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condenser
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is the
plece
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place
where the hot
water
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evaporates
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after that emitting
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steam within a small stream. Eventually, the produced steam plays a powerful factor when the turbine is powered by it, contributing
in
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genarating
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generating
electicity
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electricity
to
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the
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public consumption.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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