Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted. Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.

A lot of metropolitan areas in different countries are experiencing

decline

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in quality of life

due to

the huge increase in their populations.

This

may be because the

government

has been

linient

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lenient

with the requirements for foreign immigrants and the lack of job opportunities in the rural areas. I believe improving the facilities and

transportations

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transportation

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would help

accomodate

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accommodate

these numbers.

Firstly

, one of the reasons why many people from less-affluent nations have the capability to live in

first world

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cities is because of the simple requirements that they need to

fulfill

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.

This

is seen in Melbourne, thousands of foreigners reside in the city even though they do not have to show the

government

a

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proof of their living capability.

As a result

, more and more would want to experience

to live

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in a developed place and follow suit. Those who live in the rural areas

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the other hand, find greater opportunities in the urban to pursue their dreams.

Due to

this

, they end up leasing despite having their own house in their hometowns. If the

government

were to tackle these problems, improving the transit system must

be prioritise

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to keep up with the growing population.

This

is because if these people will all use a private vehicle to move around,

this

will create traffic jams in many parts of the city.

In addition

, air pollution will be reduced through these changes. Meanwhile, a solution to house rentees is by regulating high-rise buildings,

instead

of occupying massive space on land. In conclusion,

due to

population growth in the cities, the demand for greater housing facilities and improved transport

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is

also

increasing. It appears to me that if the

government

properly applies these remedies, it will lessen the severity of these issues.