The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided pie chart illustrates information about the professional life of Anthropologists, after finishing government sector or private company after five years of experience.
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their bachelor
bachelor
degree from a particular university, and the table compares their remuneration as freelance consultants, and occupation inChange noun form
bachelor's
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the
Overall
, according to
the data, more than half of the Anthropology graduates in
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with
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a bachelor
bachelor
degree have a full-time task. Change noun form
bachelor's
Also
, a large proportion of them receive high
salary after five years.
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a high
According to
the pie chart, the most
proportion of Anthropologists about 52% had a full-time job, Correct word choice
highest
while
a slight proportion 15% had a part-time job. On the whole, 13% of them continued their education to higher degrees, either with a part-time or full-time career. Finally
, 12% and 8% of Anthropology graduates remained unemployed or unknown respectively.
In terms of remuneration and job circumstances, the highest percentage, 50% of employees in government
sector and 40% of freelance consultants received more than 100,000$, which was the highest salary. In comparison to these two types of employment, just 30% of workers in private companies earned Add an article
the government
this
amount of salary. Additionally
, the most
percentage of workers in private Correct word choice
highest
company
35% earned 50,000$ - 74,999$. Fix the agreement mistake
companies
Thus
, it can be concluded that working in government
sector and freelance Add an article
the government
consultants
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consultant
offer
more benefits than working in private companies.Correct subject-verb agreement
offers
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