The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided pie chart illustrates information about the professional life of Anthropologists, after finishing
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their bachelor
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bachelor
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degree from a particular university, and the table compares their remuneration as freelance consultants, and occupation in
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government sector or private company after five years of experience.
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,
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the data, more than half of the Anthropology graduates
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a bachelor
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bachelor
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degree have a full-time task.
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, a large proportion of them receive
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salary after five years.
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the pie chart, the
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proportion of Anthropologists about 52% had a full-time job,
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a slight proportion 15% had a part-time job. On the whole, 13% of them continued their education to higher degrees, either with a part-time or full-time career.
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, 12% and 8% of Anthropology graduates remained unemployed or unknown respectively. In terms of remuneration and job circumstances, the highest percentage, 50% of employees in
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sector and 40% of freelance consultants received more than 100,000$, which was the highest salary. In comparison to these two types of employment, just 30% of workers in private companies earned
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amount of salary.
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, the
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percentage of workers in private
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companies
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35% earned 50,000$ - 74,999$.
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, it can be concluded that working in
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the government
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sector and freelance
consultants
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offer
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more benefits than working in private companies.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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