The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .
The line chart reveals the average amount of
carbon
dioxide
created per resident in four different countries which are the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the vast majority of carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person were from the United Kingdom in the given time, whilst the ones from Portugal were the lowest before 2007.
According to
the information shown in the graph, carbon
dioxide
emissions
per individual from the United Kingdom remained the highest between 1967 to 2007 although
the number already reduced from 11 tonnes
to 9 tonnes
. By contrast
, the emissions
from Portugal were the lowest before 2007 in spite of its considerable growth which increased from 1 ton to 5 tonnes
. What should be particularly mentioned was that the amount of average carbon
dioxide
emissions
from Sweden witnessed growth for a decade from 1967 to 1977 and significantly decreased from 10 tonnes
to 5 tonnes
which became the lowest among the four countries in 2007. Besides
the aforementioned, the number of carbon
dioxide
emitted by Italians fluctuated during the given period and turned into the second highest emissions
by 7 tonnes
in 2007.Submitted by s99104032 on
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