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The chart below shows the percentages of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentages of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of households who are tenants or owners in England and Wales between 1918 to 2011. Looking at
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overall
Correct article usage
the overall
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 perspective, it is apparent that there is an upward trend for people who have their own accommodation and a general trend of downward for households who
rented
Wrong verb form
rent
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 their house. With regards to the owned houses, the ownership rate witnessed just above 75% in 1918 and
this
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 rate steadily declined to 30% in 2001. In 2011, the rate increased by around 5% to approximately 35%. Contrary to the trend of ownership, the
people
Correct quantifier usage
number of people
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 who rented their house over the given period went up from around 20% in 1918 to just below 70% in 2001. the
last
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 record for those households that were tenants saw a margin decline to 65%.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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