the pie charts below shop the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The two pie charts illustrate what percentage of the online shopping retail sectors in New

Zealand

between 2003 and 2013.

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, at the beginning of the period

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books contributed the least to sales in New

Zealand

,

while

clothes were the most significant retail sector. In comparison,

at the end

of the period film or music and travel became the largest sales segment and the lowest contribution was made by clothes. The retail sector accounted for 19% of New

Zealand

's sales in 2003

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and experienced

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growth

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of less than one in tenth in 2013. Film or music was about fifth in 2003, and experimented a more than twofold increase to more than third in 2013. The clothes, which

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almost a quarter of New

Zealand

's retail sectors in 2003, fell to 16% in 2013. The largest

sale

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segment was travel roughly more than a third in 2003, decreasing to 29%

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the end of the period.