our English-speakng friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email recommmend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explainn how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

Hello Vineet, Hope you are doing great.I am thrilled to hear that you want to learn a new sport.Sports are a great way to keep ourselves mentally and physically fit.As you are a fitness freak and you have a great physique, I recommend trying
climbing. To get started in
climbing, I suggest you sign up for a beginner's
and once you
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learn the skills, you can do the advanced
climbing helps mentally ,and physically and
builds endurance.There is a club which has both options outdoor and
as well as
indoor.Once you've mastered indoors, you will be good to hit the mountains.I have a good experience of
climbing ,I would be more than happy to assist you. Why don't we take the
together?I will
sign up for a beginner
with you .It would be a great opportunity to challenge ourselves.I promise you won't regret taking
adventurous sport. Let me know, if you are interested. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care Polia
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