The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The project designs here illustrate the development plan for an airport at
present
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the present
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situation and the following year's situation. we can see here some radical changes in the maps. Basically, the area will be extended and the different
establishment
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establishments
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will be seen. The walkway will be replaced totally by the sky train. Presently, there are only 8 gates
can
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be seen. The
number
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will increase to 18.
Besides
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, the walkway will be removed and the Sky train will be introduced
instead
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. Some shops will take place near security and passport control. Bag drop will be seen in
departure
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the departure
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lounge. Check-in and cafe
location
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will be changed. The
number
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of departure gates will
twice
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in
number
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than present. Passport control and Customs will remain the same place.
Arrivals
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The arrivals
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gate will be 2 in
number
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.
In Addition
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, an ATM will be constructed with a car hire facility.
moreover
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, a cafe will take place after the customs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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