The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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information concerning the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the numbers which became more popular and less popular over a period of 40 years. Figures are given in percentages.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of people that prefer to use
private
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car was the greatest number over the following 40 years,
whereas
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of citizens preferred to choose recreational vehicles.
To begin
with an upward trend, it is
intersting
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interesting
to note that the
propotion
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proportion
promotion
of private cars soaring from 40 in 1965 to 55 in 1985 was the greatest increase before a slightly rising to 60 in 2005. Moving on to a downward trend, the most remarkable point is that the biggest decrease was in recreational vehicles falling from 15 in 1965 to 5 in 1985 before a bit rising to 8 in 2005 and in lorries and other cars which
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at 20 before a significantly drop to 10 in 2005.
Finally
,
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the public
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transport rate fell from 25 in 1965 to 20 in 1985 before slightly
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to 22 in 2005.
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