You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter give details of what was wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Esteemed Manager, I, Sandeep Kaur: writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the cooling system at your hotel.
Last
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month, I stayed at your hotel located in the city centre for a week with my husband. The first day was a nightmare because the air conditioner was not working properly and I was unable to reset the temperature of my room. At that time, I called the receptionist to look
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matter as we were sweating badly. She informed us that
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maintenance the AC will remain on halt for a few hours for the next couple of days. It was really frustrating. We purchased a fan online to get relief from the heat. I would like to suggest that you should inform customers in advance or at least provide them with temporary resources to enhance their staying experience.
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, I want you to refund my money because it was a worthless experience of staying at your building. I hope you will look into the matter and deposit a refund in my account soon. Yours faithfully Sandeep Kaur
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