Jenny is conducting a research project on cell phone use. The chart shows the percentage of students, and parents of students, at Jenny’s school who owned cell phone over a 14 year period. The table provides the cell phone ownership rate nationwide over the same timeframe.

The table summarizes the total percentage of people nationally who owned a

phone

between the years 2002 to 2016.

Furthermore

, the line graph compares the

cell

phone

ownership

rates during the same time period, between

students

and

parents

at Jenny's school.

Overall

, the percentage of people who

owned

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a

phone

increased through the years. As evidently seen from the table, a greater increase in the

ownership

of

cell

phones can be seen from 2002 to 2010, when compared to 2010 to 2016, by 25% and 11% respectively.

Additionally

, over the years,

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cell

phone

ownership

rates have increased for both

students

and

parents

. The number of

students

who owned a

cell

phone

drastically changed

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when compared to

parents

. On the one hand ,

initially

, the rate of

phone

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owned by

students

increased gradually from 2002 to 2012, after which it skyrocketed by approximately 50 % from 2012 to 2016.

On the other hand

, the number of

parents

who owned a

phone

, gradually increased from 2002 to 2016 by roughly 30%.

On the contrary

, the

cell

phone

ownership

rate for

students

increased by nearly 75% during the same timeframe.