Jenny is conducting a research project on cell phone use. The chart shows the percentage of students, and parents of students, at Jenny’s school who owned cell phone over a 14 year period. The table provides the cell phone ownership rate nationwide over the same timeframe.
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The table summarizes the total percentage of people nationally who owned a
phone
between the years 2002 to 2016. Furthermore
, the line graph compares the cell
phone
ownership
rates during the same time period, between students
and parents
at Jenny's school.
Overall
, the percentage of people who owned
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phone
increased through the years. As evidently seen from the table, a greater increase in the ownership
of cell
phones can be seen from 2002 to 2010, when compared to 2010 to 2016, by 25% and 11% respectively.
Additionally
, over the years, the
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cell
phone
ownership
rates have increased for both students
and parents
. The number of students
who owned a cell
phone
drastically changed,
when compared to Remove the comma
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parents
. On the one hand ,initially
, the rate of phone
owned by Fix the agreement mistake
phones
students
increased gradually from 2002 to 2012, after which it skyrocketed by approximately 50 % from 2012 to 2016. On the other hand
, the number of parents
who owned a phone
, gradually increased from 2002 to 2016 by roughly 30%. On the contrary
, the cell
phone
ownership
rate for students
increased by nearly 75% during the same timeframe.Submitted by vani13padmakumar on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, cell, ownership, students, parents with synonyms.
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