You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe your problems •tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr.John, I am writing to thank you for accepting us as your Tenant.I want to let you know that I

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received

my paychecks which you sent back after the

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employment

verification. As

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that we are

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planning

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the individuals like me . I am supposed to get the

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month due

to the pandemic my

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processing time is fluctuating .

Curenntly

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Currently

,I don't have any information about the exact processing time, the government officials stated that all immigration issues might be solved by the end of next month. As I signed the rental

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agreement

I would like to sub-lease the house to

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and I will move in as soon as my

visa

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me. Yours Sincerely, Vikram Kallem.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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Varied vocabulary

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Clear and correct grammar

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