You have seen a advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a eletterto the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to for apply the babysitter you posted in a local magazine
last
month. I am really interested in a career where I can take
care
of your child for more than six months and stay at your home. I think I'm the right person for the
job
because I have a lot of experience in taking
care
of children in Sydney. And the reason I want to do
this
is because I really love babies and I can make sure I take
care
of them.
Besides
, if I work
this
job
it will be helpful in improving my work skills and career. As you mentioned in the advertisement, I will explain in detail why I am suitable for
this
job
. I worked with children for more than 3 years and am good enough to teach elementary school students. I can cook simple dishes and provide first aid if necessary. Plus, I am multilingual so I can speak French, English, and Korean , I can teach them if you want.
Furthermore
, I took
care
of kindergarteners in Korean families until three months ago, but they moved to Canada and now I quit. But I still have a good relationship with them. When I have free time, I want to rest and spend time looking at monuments throughout the city.
Moreover
, I am studying Spanish now. I want to go to read Spanish books or watch movies in my free time. Let me know if you think I am the appropriate person for the
job
. I look forward to the good news. Yours sincerely, Hwi ju Jin.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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