Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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therefore
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building
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buildings
while
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further
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popular
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mostly
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because urban cities population has increased. If you live in Correct your spelling
popular
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an
apartment
building, building owners provide you security
service 24 hours and at the same time you can experience the modern life style
. Those are the main Correct your spelling
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on
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suitable
this
building and they use funiture
and other things as per Correct your spelling
furniture
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their
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requirements
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customers
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of building
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buildings
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living. Correct your spelling
their
In addition
to this
, landlords will provide security
service
and they will do the building maintenance.
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services
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there are some disadvantages, mostly those building Add an article
an apartment
construct
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a house
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village,
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a spectacular
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gardens
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this
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disadvantages
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the advantages
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the disadvantages. Hense, you will have more Correct your spelling
outweighed
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benefits
such
as security
, building
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and building
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maintenance
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you
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