Having
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fulltimeCorrect your spelling
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job
definitely is the most important thing you should do as
aChange the article
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adult, but the reason for having a
job
varyChange the verb form
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with different
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, some might get a
job
for earningChange preposition
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money
and
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with
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and dull
life
, some might get a
job
for achieving
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aim and to
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their potential.
The societyCorrect article usage
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composeVerb problem
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different views on
jobFix the agreement mistake
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, it is normal because people are different indistinctly. Apart from many different views on
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,
job
satisfaction
is the most important to me personally and I will explain
inCorrect pronoun usage
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the following passage
along with
rebuttalCorrect article usage
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statement.
To commence with,
Job
satisfaction
is the most important because
jobFix the agreement mistake
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are one component of our
life
. The meaning of
life
is to enjoy what you
participatedWrong verb form
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in, I would not want working
becomeFix the infinitive
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a nightmare for me, I want to wake up every day
fillChange the form of the verb
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with excitement about what I am going to achieve through my
work
. With that being said, I embed the idea of “
work
-
life
balance”, which
striveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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for
balanceAdd an article
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between
work
and enjoyment.
Also
, I want to achieve my biggest potential in
work
, in modern society we
prioritizedWrong verb form
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work
,
I Correct word choice
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don’t want to
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most of the time in my
life
, simply
forChange preposition
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money
, if the currency suddenly goes
hyperinflationChange preposition
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or the central bank
collapseCorrect subject-verb agreement
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then
all my effort would be vanished.
Apart from
Job
satisfaction
over
money
, I think it is reasonable for people to strive for
money
from
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. Nowadays, the cost of living is so high that spending on rental, food,
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will nearly consume all of your paycheck. I think the practical response is
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as much
money
as you
couldWrong verb form
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,Remove the comma
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so that you will have a sense of security.
In a nutshell,
job
satisfaction
is more important than
money
couldCorrect word choice
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be understandChange the verb form
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as aiming “
work
-
life
balance”
also
minimizeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the risk of
money
losing value.
On the other hand
,
money
more important than
job
satisfaction
can be a practical response to high living
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. Either way is reasonable and
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it
actCorrect subject-verb agreement
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according to
one’s value, which
it Correct pronoun usage
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is a subjective approach from
individualCorrect article usage
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to navigate through
life
.