You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe your problems •tell him/her when you think you can move in.

#move #apartment #month #landlord #•explain #situation #•describe #•tell

Dear Johan, I am writing to request you that I will not be available to shift your flat in upcoming month because of hospitalised on

last

week.

Doctor

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The doctor

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has advised me to

take

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apply

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rest for one month at least. Since

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apply

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have been deciding

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decided

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move

your

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to your

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apartment in September

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apply

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have

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had

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a car accident on Monday and my back was ruptured during

this

incident. Unfortunately, I am unable to

move

and do my chores at home.

Beside

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this

, my family cannot shift without me because of the

stuffs

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stuff

kinds of stuff

pieces of stuff

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that are

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are

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pending for

pack

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packing

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up.

This

is not the right time to

move

your apartment

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the 1st

September

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of September

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as we mentioned in the contract. If you consider my plea

then

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will surely to

move

this

house in October.

Its

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highly

greatful

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great

to me that we can come within two months. I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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17Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

153 words

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Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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