You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe your problems •tell him/her when you think you can move in.

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Dear Johan, I am writing to inform you that I will not be available to

shift

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to your flat in the upcoming month because of being hospitalised

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week. The doctor has advised me to rest for one month at least. Since I decided to

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to your apartment in September. I had a car accident on Monday and my back was ruptured during

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incident. Unfortunately, I am unable to

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and do my chores at home.

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, my family cannot shift without me because of the kinds of stuff

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are pending for packing up.

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is not the right time to

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your apartment on the 1st of September as we mentioned in the contract. If you consider my plea

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I will surely

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house in October. It's really great to me that we can come within two months. I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely,

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

158 words

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