The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The spending on three categories among various
age
groups of citizens in the UK in 2004 is represented by the chart below.
Overall
, it is obvious that the
percentage
of
food
and drink increases as
people
get older
while
the other two categories vary depending on the
age
group
. The money spent on both
food
and entertainment increases steadily among the
age
groups.
Food
started at 6% in the
age
under 30 and increased steeply till it reached 17% in the 46-75
age
group
.
Moreover
,
the
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entertainment began at 7% in
people
under the
age
of 30 and kept rising till it got
to14
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to 14
% in
people
between the 46 and 60 years old.
However
,
food
kept increasing till it ended up exceeding 20% in the 76+
age
group
,
while
entertainment dropped to 13% in the
age
group
of 76+ .
On the other hand
, the money spent on restaurants and hotels fluctuated between the
age
groups. The
percentage
was the highest in
people
under the
age
of 30 where it was 14%. That
percentage
decreased to 12% in the 46-60
age
group
. Yet, the
percentage
increased steeply in the
age
group
of 76+ to go from 2% to 7%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, percentage, food, people, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steeply" was used 2 times.

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