Some people think traffic and housing problems in big cities can be solved by moving companies and their employee to the countryside.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the increase in human population globally,

traffic

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and housing

problems

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are

increased

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.Some people believe that we can tackle the

problems

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of

traffic

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and housing by moving large

companies

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to the

countryside

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.

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me, it could solve some

problems

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. Many large

companies

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have their headquarters in the cities and

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of

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which

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cities are always crowded.The local trains and other public transports are always crowded with the employees

traveling

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travelling

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within the city to reach their offices.It would be beneficial for other civilians if the

companies

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could be moved to the

countyside

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countryside

.

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,the roads and trains will not be

much

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crowded as most of the people will go out of the city for work.

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,there are many large factories which contribute to

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pollution on a huge scale.

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the limited space in the cities,there are not many trees to tackle the

problem

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of

air

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pollution.It will not only solve the

problem

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of

traffic

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and housing

,

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but

also

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will help in improving the

air

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quality.

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, if the factories are moving to the

countryside

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,the

traffic

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on the roads will be decreased and as there are many trees in the

countryside

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,the

problem

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of pollution can be solved too.

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,there is no denying the fact that the

problem

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of

traffic

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and housing can be solved by moving large

companies

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, factories and their employees to the

countryside

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.It will not solve

traffic

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problems

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,but

also

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improve the

air

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,

thus

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will lead to a healthy life.