Some people think traffic and housing problems in big cities can be solved by moving companies and their employee to the countryside.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the increase in human population globally,

traffic

and housing

problems

are

increased

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.Some people believe that we can tackle the

problems

of

traffic

and housing by moving large

companies

to the

countryside

.

According to

me, it could solve some

problems

. Many large

companies

have their headquarters in the cities and

as a result

of

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which

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cities are always crowded.The local trains and other public transports are always crowded with the employees

traveling

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travelling

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within the city to reach their offices.It would be beneficial for other civilians if the

companies

could be moved to the

countyside

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countryside

.

For example

,the roads and trains will not be

much

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crowded as most of the people will go out of the city for work.

Moreover

,there are many large factories which contribute to

air

pollution on a huge scale.

Due to

the limited space in the cities,there are not many trees to tackle the

problem

of

air

pollution.It will not only solve the

problem

of

traffic

and housing

,

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but

also

will help in improving the

air

quality.

For example

, if the factories are moving to the

countryside

,the

traffic

on the roads will be decreased and as there are many trees in the

countryside

,the

problem

of pollution can be solved too.

To sum up

,there is no denying the fact that the

problem

of

traffic

and housing can be solved by moving large

companies

, factories and their employees to the

countryside

.It will not solve

traffic

problems

,but

also

improve the

air

,

thus

will lead to a healthy life.