The line graph illustrates the percentage of audiences in UK who listen to radio and watch TV during the day from October to December 1992
The given line graph provides information about the
percentage
of people in the UK who listened to the radio
and watched TV
throughout the day from October to December 1992.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that most of the people who listen to the radio
, listened
to it actively from 6.00 to 15.00, Wrong verb form
listen
while
TV
watchers used
Wrong verb form
use
TV
substantially from the evening till the night.
According to
the data, at the start of the day, only a very small number of individuals used TV
or radio
. Until the sun rises, the number of TV
watchers and radio
listeners remained stable at around 5%. Therefore
, at 6.00 the proportion of UK residents who use radio
faced a significant growth in percentage
, while
the others who watch TV
minimally increased. From 9.00 to 11.00 the percentage
of TV
users slowly decreased, but then
witnessed a rapid increase.
After 13.00 the statistic of radio
listeners moderately diminished, while
the statistics of TV
onlookers had a dramatic increase in percentage
, then
it considerably dropped between 21.00 to 23.00 At the end
of the day a minority of individuals watched TV
, while
about 5% of UK residents listened to the radio
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