The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.
The pie charts show some information about average portions in percentage of three different substances namely
sodium
, saturated fats
as well
as
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and
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added sugars in common daily meals as
though
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apply
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breakfast
,
lunch
,
dinner
, and snacks in the USA.
Overall
, consuming
sodium
and saturated fat
is
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are
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dominated
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dominant
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ingredients
Fix the agreement mistake
ingredient
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in
dinner
consist
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consisting
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with
Change preposition
of
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43% and 37%.
Moreover
,
it is clear that
added
sugar
leading
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leads to
show examples
Correct article usage
a postion
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postion
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position
42
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of 42
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% in snack time.
According to
the pie charts,
breakfast
and
lunch
seem to be quite healthy meals, with a relatively even distribution of nutrients.
Breakfast
input
sodium
only 14%, saturated fat and added
sugar
compact 16%. The
situation
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situation is
situation was
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slightly different when
lunch
, all
subjects
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subject's
subjects'
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volume
are
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is
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increasing
hit
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hitting
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up to 29%
sodium
,
26
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and 26
show examples
% saturated fat, and the rest
take
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took
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19%.
On the other hand
,
dinner
and snacks appear to be unhealthy meals and less balanced. The figures
experience
Verb problem
show
show examples
that
dinner
contains the highest both
sodium
and saturated fat, which accounted for 43 per
cent
and 37 per
cent
, respectively.
However
, added
sugar
in
dinner
(23 per
cent
) is higher than those in
breakfast
and
lunch
as well. For snacks, there is 42 per
cent
of added
sugar
contained and
this
percentage makes the highest contribution.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, breakfast, lunch, dinner, sugar, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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