The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.
The pie charts show some information about average portions in percentage of three different substances namely
sodium
, saturated fats as well
as
added sugars in common daily meals as Correct word choice
and
though
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apply
breakfast
, lunch
, dinner
, and snacks in the USA.
Overall
, consuming sodium
and saturated fat is
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are
dominated
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dominant
ingredients
in Fix the agreement mistake
ingredient
dinner
consist
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consisting
with
43% and 37%. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, it is clear that
added sugar
leading
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leads to
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a postion
postion
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position
42
% in snack time.
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of 42
According to
the pie charts, breakfast
and lunch
seem to be quite healthy meals, with a relatively even distribution of nutrients. Breakfast
input sodium
only 14%, saturated fat and added sugar
compact 16%. The situation
slightly different when Add a verb
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situation was
lunch
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subjects'
are
increasing Correct subject-verb agreement
is
hit
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hitting
sodium
, 26
% saturated fat, and the rest Correct word choice
and 26
take
19%.
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took
On the other hand
, dinner
and snacks appear to be unhealthy meals and less balanced. The figures experience
that Verb problem
show
dinner
contains the highest both sodium
and saturated fat, which accounted for 43 per cent
and 37 per cent
, respectively. However
, added sugar
in dinner
(23 per cent
) is higher than those in breakfast
and lunch
as well. For snacks, there is 42 per cent
of added sugar
contained and this
percentage makes the highest contribution.Submitted by ambercampbell.xx25 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, breakfast, lunch, dinner, sugar, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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