The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
The bar graph compares the male and female
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students'
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six different art-related Change preposition
in
class
from Linguistics to Philosophy at a UK university in 2011.
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classes
Overall
, female participation in the class
outweighs the
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that
male
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of male
students
and only one class
shows the opposite situation through to
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throughout
While
one class
have huge difference between different sex rest of them have slight differences.
Regarding female students
, enrollment to
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in
class
showed a huge difference with male Fix the agreement mistake
classes
students
with a ratio of 150 to 60 respectively. Also
, most
popular subject for female Correct article usage
the most
students
was Linguistics andRephrase
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secondly
, History and Archelogy. Addition
to that, Linguistics saw a second huge difference between the opposite sex which is approximately 240 Change preposition
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female
and 160 Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
.
Looking specifically at male Fix the agreement mistake
males
students
, only Art and Design showed more enrollment when compare
with their female colleagues with a ratio of 170 to 150. Change the form of the verb
compared
However
, female students
attend to
History and Change preposition
apply
Archeoloy
and Communication and Media studies more than Correct your spelling
Archaeology
male
by nearly 50 people.Fix the agreement mistake
males
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