The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
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The bar graph illustrates the quantity of free
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enjoyed by males and females having various types of employment from 1998-99.
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, there was a certain amount of leisure
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present in all types of employment in the case of women.
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, for the men, there were scenes where the enjoyment
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was absent. We can observe that for the men the maximum
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of free
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was almost above 80, for the unemployed and retired categories. Even the
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employees had around 50
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of enjoyment
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in a week but there was no free
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for
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and housewives. For females, there were similar trends for retired and unemployed cases, where they had nearly 80
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of
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free
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. The Lower limit of leisure
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was approximately 38
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, creating a huge difference in the minimum amount of free
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provided to men and women.
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