The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
Compared in the bar chart are the kinds of accommodation that the British favoured during their holidays in 4 different countries (
England
,
Scotland
, Wales and Northern
Ireland
) in the year 2010.
Overall
, the hotel has been the most chosen in all parts of the United Kingdom.
However
, the British do not seem to like staying in the caravan, with the exception of those in Northern
Ireland
. First of all, the hotel has stated the most per
cent
in
England
with about 55 per
cent
, followed by roughly 51 per
cent
in
Scotland
, almost 50 per
cent
in Wales and approximately 45 per
cent
in Northern
Ireland
. Apart from that, Self-catering has charted the second most favoured in
Scotland
with 30 per
cent
,
England
and Wales with about 28 per
cent
.
However
, it was the least-liked option in Northern
Ireland
, with only 11 per
cent
. Other than that, the English prefer the caravan to camping in
Scotland
and Northern
Ireland
with a gap of nearly 3 per
cent
and 20 per
cent
in both respected countries.
In contrast
, in
England
and Northern
Ireland
, the British have chosen camping over the caravan.
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