40.Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some say that governments need to use more funds to maintain tongues that are only spoken by a small

amount

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of

people

,

while

others would argue

that is

a waste of capital.

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essay would argue that

although

is part of

history

, there are more important activities that need large

amount

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of financial resources. On the one hand, all

languanges

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languages

have

history

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a history

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, from where they come from, how they were created and who talked these languages.

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are

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all

learn

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in

history

classes, but if a language

disappear

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,

then

part of the culture of that place will be vanished, so the descendants will not know about it, and have less knowledge about their nation.

For example

, China have lots of dialects, but since

large

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number of Chinese

people

are

inmigrating

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immigrating

migrating

to other countries, their kids do not know how to speak the dialect, if

this

continue

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happening,

then

, after several years it will be forgotten by the individuals.

However

, I believe that there are other solutions

such

as teaching others about the language, so more

people

know it and speak it.

On the other hand

, the planet is facing some important problems that need to be solved,

such

as global warming, climate change and contamination.

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is because if

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answer

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for

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this

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problems

are

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not found,

then

all living things will be in danger, but looking for solutions,

researchs

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research

researches

and experiments need to be

made

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, so a lot of money is needed. Recent research concluded that in 2020 around

a

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half of the experiments

about

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the

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climate change were stopped because of

lack

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a lack

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of resources, so they couldn’t continue working. I believe

this

point of view is preferable because

people

’s lives are more important. In conclusion,

although

culture

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the culture

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and

history

of a region might be forgotten, there are problems that affect all the

people

in the world that are more urgent

which

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and

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need financial resources, and

that is

why it is more important to use the funds

in

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these activities.