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The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces over a period of 5 years.

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces over a period of 5 years.
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percentage
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stedents
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students
 among
university
 graduates in various Canadian provinces from 2001 to 2006.
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 outgoing,
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lower
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. Now turning to details, in 2006 the
percentage
 of graduated students increased
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 6% in
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comparison
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Quebec
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 huge anges, than others. The
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university
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 even 3% and became
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a university
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 growth.
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universities
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only
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of them
 reached 10%,
whlie
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while
others
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 progress stopped in
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the range
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 of 5%. If in 2006 British Colombia became to
university
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number of
greduates
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graduates
,
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although
, in 2001, the situation was dire with 4%. In conclusion,
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 chart illuminates information about
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the percentage
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 change in the share
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 students among varied universities
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 Canadian provinces.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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