The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The Given diagram illustrates the process of making
energy
in
Change preposition
on
domestic
scale. Correct article usage
a domestic
Overall
, there are six steps required to turn compost into electricity
before it’s ready to use for house consumption. The steps are divided into two main stages namely producing methane gas
and converting the gas
into electricity
.
To begin
with, organic domestic waste and water are collected in the underground steel tank up to three quarter
of the capacity for the fermentation purpose. Correct your spelling
three-quarters
This
process produces gas
called methane which then
goes to the storing container through pipes and then
to the compressor to compressed
it before it is processed to be Change the form of the verb
compress
energy
.
From the compressor, the solidify
Wrong verb form
solidified
gas
is transferred to and processes
in Wrong verb form
processed
combustion
engine. The outcome of Add an article
a combustion
the combustion
this
process is mechanical energy
. After that, the energy
is delivered sato
Correct your spelling
to
generator
in order to convert it to Correct article usage
a generator
electricity
. Afterward
, the Change the spelling
Afterwards
energy
resulted
Wrong verb form
resulting
in
Change preposition
from
this
step is stored in battery
. Add an article
the battery
a battery
Finally
, the electricity
ready
to be used for domestic Add a missing verb
is ready
purpose
.Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, electricity, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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