The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Ausralia in 1999
The presented table illustrates the portion of various groups of individuals Australis who resizing in
poverty
in 1999.
From an overall
perspective, while
a majority of sole parents suffered from poverty
, a number of aged couple people had an average income and they were not highly poverty
.
As observed in the details, 999000 people who were sole parents had a lower income compared to all households
in Australia in 1999. After
this
category, 359000 single and no children families suffered from less money.
On the other hand
, the aged couple households
had 4% of this
poverty
category, and next,
the single person and couple family without children devoted 6% and 7% proportion of this
research between households
' Australis.
Finally
, 1837000 (11%) of households
Australis involved with penury in 1999. As a result
, the government of Australia must pay attention to this
matter and they try to create a lot of job opportunities for these families.Submitted by minasarani64 on
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