You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the total number of students on a business course at a UK university and the pie charts show the percentage of different nationalities on the course in 1991 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. The line graph shows the total number of students on a business course at a UK university and the pie charts show the percentage of different nationalities on the course in 1991 and 2011.

The line graph illustrates the total figure of

students

who are studying a business

course

at a British university from 1991 to 2011 , and the pie charts display the proportion broken down by

countries

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.

Overall

, it is evident that, meanwhile, the number of

students

on

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in

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the business

course

increased,

the

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and the

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subject experienced a growth in internationalism. What is most striking when looking

on

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at

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the data is the fact that there is an increasing demand from international

students

.

Whereas

, in 1991, 51 % had British roots,

this

proportion was reduced to a third in 2011. In consequence, foreign countries

such

as India and Nigeria increased their percentages by

the

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double and 18 %, respectively.

Although

,

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this

upward trend is applicable

for

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to

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several countries, the Italian proportion,

however

, was decreased by 10 %.

Additionally

, the

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gained popularity mainly among foreign

students

is contributed by the fact that the total amount steadily increased from 1991 to 2011. In total, the number almost doubled in

this

time period as the

course

started at 67 participants in 1991 and reached its peak at 118 members in 2011. In conclusion, the growing popularity of the business

course

is displayed throughout the increased number of

students

and the climbing

multinationlism

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multinationalism

multinationals

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