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Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, Recently,
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 viewed an advertisement
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 'The Hindustan Times' newspaper, regarding the support needed at the house during the upcoming summer vacations for just
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about
 1-2 hours. I graduated from Niagara College, Toronto, and achieved food handling certification, I think I would be the best fit to help you
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. I will be able to cook different types of meals for your family. Not only
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 the festival season,
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 will help you in the cleaning of the whole kitchen area if needed any day. In my early
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 I used to help my mother after my school hours, so I am passionate
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 all these activities, which
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 provides me
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 satisfaction. Even at my own
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 I do cooking, but
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 have some spare time after that. So, to utilize the vacant time I can come
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 your residence to help you. As
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 interesting job, I would be available 5
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 a week Monday to Friday from 6pm-9pm. On weekends I can work too, but
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 will require some incentive
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 on these days. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours truly, Parneet Kaur
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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