Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take

#landlord #furniture #action

Dear Thomas, I am writing to inform you the furniture in your apartment is not

good

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in good

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condition. Let me introduce

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myself

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first,

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was

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yours

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your

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new tenant in

this

flat

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for a

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month

ago

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apply

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. Since we moved to

this

property we saw your furniture was rusted and

bad

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in bad

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condition.

Besides

this

, the couch area was broken from

left

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the left

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side and

sheet

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the sheet

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of the sofa was torn from many sides. In

fact

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fact,

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the cupboard doors have no locks so we cannot save our essential things. The side tables have no doors and

not

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are not

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cleaned. I am suggesting you

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apply

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solve

this

problem so that we can put our personal things in the lockers. The furniture needs

repairment

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repair

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then

you can call the carpenter to fix all the wood as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

141 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take

Word Count

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?