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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take

#landlord #furniture #action
Dear Thomas, I am writing to inform you the furniture in your apartment is not
good
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in good
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 condition. Let me introduce
me
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myself
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first,
I
am
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was
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yours
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your
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 new tenant in
this
 flat
a
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for a
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month
ago
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apply
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. Since we moved to
this
 property we saw your furniture was rusted and
bad
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in bad
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 condition.
Besides
this
, the couch area was broken from
left
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the left
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 side and
sheet
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the sheet
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 of the sofa was torn from many sides. In
fact
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fact,
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 the cupboard doors have no locks so we cannot save our essential things. The side tables have no doors and
not
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are not
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 cleaned. I am suggesting you
to
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solve
this
 problem so that we can put our personal things in the lockers. The furniture needs
repairment
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repair
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then
 you can call the carpenter to fix all the wood as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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