You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

Dear, Sir/Madam, Myself Urvashi Bhavsar. I am writing
this
letter in regard to
express
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my concerns that I have received an envelope without a new
bank
card
.I would like you
look
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into
this
matter, that would be really appreciated. I opened
saving
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savings
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accounts in your southwest branch and the financial advisor of your
bank
did all
procedures
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the procedures
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and paperwork for getting a new
bank
card
. He mentioned that I
will
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be receiving a new
bank
card
within 2 weeks. Yesterday, I received an envelope from the
bank
to acknowledge receipt of a new
card
.
However
, when I opened the envelope, the
card
was missing from inside. I checked
twiced
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twice
but it was not there. I would like you to propose a solution for
this
matter as soon as possible.
As
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I
spoke to
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your advisor that I need a new
bank
card
immediately within two weeks as I am going
for
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on
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vacation in
couple
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a couple
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days
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and I have only one
bank
card
which he promised to be there in two weeks. I would like you to give me a new
bank
card
immediately and if you want to come to take a new
bank
card
in your branch, I will be there to receive it. I hope you will understand my situation and I am looking forward to your quick response. If you have any
further
questions please do not hesitate to reach out to me. Yours Sincerely, Urvashi
Submitted by bhavsar.urvashi on

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • acknowledge receipt
  • compromised security
  • unauthorized transactions
  • identity theft
  • reissue
  • secure (the account)
  • fraudulent activity
  • account holder
  • security measures
  • customer service
  • follow-up
  • discrepancy
  • escalate the issue
  • trace the delivery
  • account security
  • financial risk
  • confidential
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