You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter – Explain why you would like the job – give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ – say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir/Madam, I am
reachingout
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reaching out
to you in response to the post on the Australian magazine .I Have seen that you are looking for someone to
takecare
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take care
of your child.Since
childhood
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childhood,
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I
love
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have loved
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spending time with young kids
that
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which
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is the main reason why I am looking for
this
opportunity.
To begin
with my experience,during my College
days
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days,
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I worked as a child support worker at the Newborn daycare for almost two years .
Additionally
, I have an extensive experience as a
Baby-sitter
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babysitter
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.To
add-on
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, I am
very
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a very
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humble , calm and very
hygiene
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person.Looking
all
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this
makes me a potential person for
this
position. As I completed my schooling I have
alot
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a lot
of time where I spend most of it in dog parks and
oldage
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old age
old-age
homes. I look forward to
hear
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from you soon, Yours sincerely Vikram
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertisement
  • live with
  • look after
  • six-year-old child
  • suitable
  • employ
  • free time
  • Australia
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