The chart below gives information about trends in internet used by females in the USA in 2 years

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the number of women who spent time online in the USA in the year 2000 and 2001. Generally, the rate increased slightly in 2

years

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and the younger use screens more than the older. The 65

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old females of

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the lowest group, only 20 per

cent

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in 2000 and approximately a third in 2001. In comparison, almost

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school girls used the internet in that period

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of time

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. There was 90 per

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of 12 – 15

years

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old girls in 2000 and still kept the same rate in 2001

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it was a bit lower of 16 – 18

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in 2000 and in 2001 everyone applied.

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, around 78 per

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of women in 25 – 35 ages remained for 2

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compared with 70 per

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of the 36 – 45 group in the year 2000 and rose 80 per

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of the population logged on the internet.