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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008
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The bar chart illustrates the number of fruits and vegetables consumed by children and adults over the period of 2001 to 2008.
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, the chart provides a general increase in percentage across seven years for all the categories of people.
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, children ate the least amount of fruits and vegetables in comparison to others, particularly from 2001 to 2003 whereupon they consumed only 10%.
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, their highest intake was in 2007 when they ate more than 25%. Even though that number dropped to 24% in 2008, it was generally higher than their past years' data. Meanwhile, for
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adults, the average percentage of men is comparatively higher than
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. The highest intake for men was in 2006 at 35%,
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 for
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 it was 28% that same year.
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 data remained consistent for
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 till 2008, but for the opposite sex, the value fell to 30%. Regardless, the
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 started with 17% in 2001 and that was their lowest consumption; since
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 the data has been slowly increasing. The same applies to the men but their starting value in 2003 was 22% before it kept getting higher.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Portion: a serving size of food.
  • Trend: a general direction in which something is developing or changing.
  • Demographic: related to the structure of populations.
  • Awareness: knowledge or perception of a situation or fact.
  • Socioeconomic status: a person's economic and social position based on income, education, and occupation.
  • Accessibility: the quality of being easy to obtain or use.
  • Guidelines: a set of recommendations or advice on how something should be done.
  • Subsidy: a sum of money granted by the government to assist an industry or business.
  • Lifestyle: the way in which a person lives.
  • Public health: the health of the population as a whole, especially as monitored, regulated, and promoted by the state.
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