Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

day and age, it is thought by some people that kindergarten is the best suitable for

children

. Others,

however

, hold the opinion that family

members

such

as

children

’s grandparents will be more useful in caring for their grandchildren. From my personal perspective, I believe that

children

should be in the

caring

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of

these

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both family

members

and

childcare

centers

to ensure

children’s

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their

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mental and physical

healthy

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are well-being.

To begin

with, there are quite plausible reasons for

childcare

centers

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giving

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children

high-quality care.

Firstly

, in

childcare

facilities

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there are a large quantity of specialized cutting-edge facilities to serve

children

,

while

in some households are not,

for example

, a large playing

filed

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, medic, education amenities, and a

balance

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diet. With these things,

children

are

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accessed

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to healthy physical development.

Secondly

, daycare

centers

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have well-trained staff in

childcare

skills, and safety knowledge,

while

, family

members

are not equipped with some essential skills in

childcare

major. If

children

are in

the

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emergency case

such

as hiccups, their grandparents

are not have

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any

experienced

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in

this

case will

do

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not know what to do to tackle

with

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this

issue or they may worsen the situation,

while

in

childcare

centers

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they have enough

medic

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staff and medical equipment to address

this

issue immediately.

On the other hand

, others are of the opinion that blood is thicker than water.

Firstly

, parents and family

members

are easier than others in teaching

children

because

of

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children

tend to listen to their own fresh and blood. When

children

are facing mental health issues, they prioritize their parents to share their problems and listen to parents’

recommendation

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to find a solution rather than a kindergarten teacher.

Furthermore

,

children

who

is

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nurtured and

took

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care

by

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family

members

will have a sense of love from their family

members

and belonging,

that

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is essential for

children

when they growing up.

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study

indicate

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that parents

those

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who have

been

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grown up in loved by their family from

young

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a young

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age

are

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tendency

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the tendency

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to behave with their offspring

similar

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to

they

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what they

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have been taught. In conclusion, it

seem

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evident that the role in teaching and taking care

for

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children

of preschool age by family

members

and

childcare

centers

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each have their own unique advantages to

children

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children's

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well-being. The cooperation between family and

childcare

centers

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play

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an important role in

children

’s mental and physical

heath

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health

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.