You recently enjoyed a meal at an expensive restaurant, and you were impressed with the good service you received. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •Explain the circumstances of your visit to the restaurant. • Describe the service you received. • Say what you would like the manger to do.
Dear Manager,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for an exceptional experience at your restaurant. I received an excellent service
and a memorial dinner that your establishment provided.
During my visit to the Legend Restaurant, I had the pleasure of enjoying a truly remarkable meal. This
occasion was particularly special as I was celebrating my birthday party with my family.
From the moment I stepped through the door, I was welcomed with warmth and hospitality. The staff's attention to detail and dedication to providing excellent service
were evident throughout the evening. I was particularly impressed by the culinary delights. The meal itself was an exquisite journey of flavours. Each dish was masterfully prepared, showcasing the expertise of the culinary team. The presentation was artful and attention to taste and quality were evident in every bite.
I would appreciate it if you could convey my heartfelt gratitude to your entire team. Their commitment to delivering exceptional service
has left a lasting impression on me. This
exemplary service
deserves recognition.
Once again, thank you for providing an unforgettable dinner.
Yours sincerely,
Lana NguyenSubmitted by nguyenlyacbd on
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coherence cohesion
Provide more specific details about the exceptional service you received.
coherence cohesion
Include a request for the manager to take action.
task achievement
Maintain a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.
lexical resource
Use more varied vocabulary and expressions.
grammatical range and accuracy
Add more complex sentence structures and demonstrate grammatical accuracy.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
