The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given diagram delineates the information about the procedure for

preparation

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the preparation

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of drinks which are carbonated in nature. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, it is readily apparent that four steps are required for making

a carbonated drinks

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carbonated drinks

a carbonated drink

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which is followed by packaging and transporting.

Initially

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, normal

water

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is filtered with the help of

filter

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a filter

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.

This

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filtered

water

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is passed from the

water

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softener. During

which

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this

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chemicals are added and passed to the pump. After pumping,

mixture

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a mixture

the mixture

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of

water

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and chemicals

are

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is

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transferred to an electrical heater, for heating. After heating,

water

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is moved to the chamber by a pipe which is known as a cooling pipe, to cool down the temperature. On one side of

chamber

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the chamber

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,

cooling

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the cooling

a cooling

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pipe is connected,

while

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on another end an inlet is present that

help

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helps

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in

entry

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the entry

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of carbon dioxide.

This

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help

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helps

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in formation of the carbonated

water

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.

This

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carbonated

water

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is conveyed to a tank known as

mixing

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a mixing

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tank.

This

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tank

have

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has

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three different

sub chambers

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sub-chambers

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in it, one is for colouring, another is for flavouring and in between

of

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apply

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these two a box is present containing the specific kind of syrup. After mixing, it is moved to the filter to get filtered carbonated

water

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and the filling is done.

This

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water

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is filled in

the

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apply

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bottles and cans. These are packaged and supplied to

supermarket

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supermarkets

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