The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram delineates the information about the procedure for
preparation
of drinks which are carbonated in nature.
Looking from an Correct article usage
the preparation
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that four steps are required for making a carbonated drinks
which is followed by packaging and transporting.
Correct the article-noun agreement
carbonated drinks
a carbonated drink
Initially
, normal water
is filtered with the help of filter
. Add an article
a filter
This
filtered water
is passed from the water
softener. During which
chemicals are added and passed to the pump. After pumping, Correct pronoun usage
this
mixture
of Add an article
a mixture
the mixture
water
and chemicals are
transferred to an electrical heater, for heating. After heating, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
water
is moved to the chamber by a pipe which is known as a cooling pipe, to cool down the temperature. On one side of chamber
, Add an article
the chamber
cooling
pipe is connected, Add an article
the cooling
a cooling
while
on another end an inlet is present that help
in Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
entry
of carbon dioxide. Add an article
the entry
This
help
in formation of the carbonated Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
water
.
This
carbonated water
is conveyed to a tank known as mixing
tank. Correct article usage
a mixing
This
tank have
three different Change the verb form
has
sub chambers
in it, one is for colouring, another is for flavouring and in between Add a hyphen
sub-chambers
of
these two a box is present containing the specific kind of syrup. After mixing, it is moved to the filter to get filtered carbonated Change preposition
apply
water
and the filling is done. This
water
is filled in the
bottles and cans. These are packaged and supplied to Correct article usage
apply
supermarket
.Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
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