Fossil fuel almost finish from this world, so many countries try to find alternative resources. Can you describe the advantages and disadvantages of this energy?

IN
THIS
WORLD PEOPLE
NEEDS
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RESOURCES OF
ENERGY
FOR
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TO
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MAINTAIN LIFE
STANDARTS
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STANDARDS
.FOSSIL
FUEL
IS THE ONE OF THE BIGGEST
ENERGY
SOURCE.IT HAS MANY UPSIDES AND DOWNSIDES.
TO BEGIN
WITH
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FOSSIL
FUEL
IS A LIMITED
ENERGY
SO IT HAS LIMITED RESOURCES WE NEED TO
USE
IT CAREFULLY BECAUSE IT CAN BE
FINISH
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.THERE IS NO LIMIT
FOR
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USAGE
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THE USAGE
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FOR
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OF
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FOSSIL
FUEL
SO PEOPLE CAN
BE
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OVERUSE
THIS
ENERGY
RESOURCE
IN ADDITION
TO THAT,FOSSIL
FUEL
HAS SOME ADVANTAGES.ONE OF THE ADVANTAGES IS FOSSIL
FUEL
IS THE MOST POWERFUL RESOURCE IF
COMPARE
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COMPARED
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THE
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OTHER ONES.IT CAN BE TEN TIMES STRONGER THAN RENEWABLE ENERGIES.
SECONDLY
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ADVANTAGE IS
IT S
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IT'S
EASY TO ACCESIBLE TO GET FOSSIL
FUEL
.USING
THIS
FUEL
IS MORE EASY THE OTHERS.
FURTHERMORE
.IT HAS SOME DOWNSIDES TOO.FOSSIL
FUEL
IS BAD FOR
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THE ENVOIRENMENT
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ENVOIRENMENT
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ENVIRONMENT
BECAUSE AFTER
USE
IT RELEASES EXTREMELY LARGE
AMOUNT
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AMOUNTS
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OF CARBON DİOXİDE SO
IT
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WHICH
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MAKES
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CAUSES
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AIR POLLUTION. DESPITE
OF
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THE
GAINING
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GAIN
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OF
THE
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ENERGY
FOSSIL
FUEL
HAS MORE DISADVANTAGES THAN ADVANTAGES
AS
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IN
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A SUMMARY ,IN MY
OPINION
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OPINION,
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FOSSIL
FUEL
SHOULDNT
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SHOULD
BE
USE
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USED
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FOR HUMANITY
ALTHOUGH
IT S NOT NECESSARY .
IT S
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IT'S
VERY BAD FOR
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THE WORLDS
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WORLDS
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WORLD'S
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FUTURE.GIVEN DAMAGE BY THE FUSSEL
FUEL
IS IRREVERSIBLE .
ALTOUGH
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ALTHOUGH
IT IS
VERY
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A VERY
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HARD TIRING AND EXPENSIVE PROCESS TO
USE
RENEWABLE
ENERGY
PEOPLE SHOULD
USE
RENEWABLE
ENERGY
BECAUSE OF THE FUTURE OF THE WORLD.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative resources
  • fossil fuels
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • renewable
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • carbon emissions
  • diverse energy options
  • job creation
  • intermittent supply
  • initial high cost
  • limited energy storage
  • geographical limitations
  • impact on wildlife
  • ecosystems
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