Fossil fuel almost finish from this world, so many countries try to find alternative resources. Can you describe the advantages and disadvantages of this energy?

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THIS

WORLD PEOPLE

NEEDS

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RESOURCES OF

ENERGY

FOR

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MAINTAIN LIFE

STANDARTS

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STANDARDS

.FOSSIL

FUEL

IS THE ONE OF THE BIGGEST

ENERGY

SOURCE.IT HAS MANY UPSIDES AND DOWNSIDES.

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WITH

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FOSSIL

FUEL

IS A LIMITED

ENERGY

SO IT HAS LIMITED RESOURCES WE NEED TO

USE

IT CAREFULLY BECAUSE IT CAN BE

FINISH

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.THERE IS NO LIMIT

FOR

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USAGE

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FOR

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FOSSIL

FUEL

SO PEOPLE CAN

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OVERUSE

THIS

ENERGY

RESOURCE

IN ADDITION

TO THAT,FOSSIL

FUEL

HAS SOME ADVANTAGES.ONE OF THE ADVANTAGES IS FOSSIL

FUEL

IS THE MOST POWERFUL RESOURCE IF

COMPARE

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THE

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OTHER ONES.IT CAN BE TEN TIMES STRONGER THAN RENEWABLE ENERGIES.

SECONDLY

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THE SECOND

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ADVANTAGE IS

IT S

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IT'S

EASY TO ACCESIBLE TO GET FOSSIL

FUEL

.USING

THIS

FUEL

IS MORE EASY THE OTHERS.

FURTHERMORE

.IT HAS SOME DOWNSIDES TOO.FOSSIL

FUEL

IS BAD FOR

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ENVOIRENMENT

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ENVIRONMENT

BECAUSE AFTER

USE

IT RELEASES EXTREMELY LARGE

AMOUNT

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OF CARBON DİOXİDE SO

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AIR POLLUTION. DESPITE

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GAINING

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THE

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ENERGY

FOSSIL

FUEL

HAS MORE DISADVANTAGES THAN ADVANTAGES

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A SUMMARY ,IN MY

OPINION

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FOSSIL

FUEL

SHOULDNT

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SHOULD

USE

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FOR HUMANITY

ALTHOUGH

IT S NOT NECESSARY .

IT S

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IT'S

VERY BAD FOR

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THE WORLDS

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WORLDS

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FUTURE.GIVEN DAMAGE BY THE FUSSEL

FUEL

IS IRREVERSIBLE .

ALTOUGH

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ALTHOUGH

IT IS

VERY

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HARD TIRING AND EXPENSIVE PROCESS TO

USE

RENEWABLE

ENERGY

PEOPLE SHOULD

USE

RENEWABLE

ENERGY

BECAUSE OF THE FUTURE OF THE WORLD.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

alternative resources
fossil fuels
advantages
disadvantages
renewable
sustainable
environmentally friendly
carbon emissions
diverse energy options
job creation
intermittent supply
initial high cost
limited energy storage
geographical limitations
impact on wildlife
ecosystems

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Fossil fuel almost finish from this world, so many countries try to find alternative resources. Can you describe the advantages and disadvantages of this energy?

Fully explain your ideas

In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Politicians or more responsible for the protection of the environment than individual stock to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to cintinue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?