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The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show thge percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts
shows
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the
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great and
inmportant
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important
 information about the amount of
water
 used by the people who were located in six different
areas
 in the world for various purposes, it was picturized clearly in percentage.
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 ratio
illustrate
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 that the communities consumed
thje
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the
water
 for three important
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, one for agriculture, second for industries
futhermore
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furthermore
 they used
for
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it for
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 domestic needs in
diverse
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the diverse
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 region namely North
America
, South
America
, Europe,
Aferica
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Africa
, Central Asia and South East Asia.
According to
 the images, it minutely visualized the consumption
odf
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of
 H2O, it varied depending upon different zones. 53% of humans
ultizing
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utilizing
 the
water
 in Southern
America
 as much
similiar
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similar
 to
the
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North
America
 they
were
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 using
upto
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up to
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 48% for industrial use
whereas
 88% of central Asia members
consuming
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 aqua as little reaching
to
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the height of
Africa
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 people who
collecting
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 for agriculture.
Lastly
 individuals from particular locality that was South Americans using for domestic cause.
To conclude
,
on
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the result points out that the usage of
water
 for agriculture was the major
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by
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 the human species compared to other
areas
 the industrial
cause
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 slightly higher in Europe related to
following
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the following
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 listed
areas
.
Domestic
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The domestic
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 purpose is the lowest usage of
water
 were mentioned expect two
areas
 one were South
America
as well as
 Europe.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, areas, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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