The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that positive effect on
environment
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the environment
play
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plays
essential
role in Add an article
an essential
everyone
life. Day by day, Change noun form
everyone's
problems
related to atmosphere
Add an article
the atmosphere
is
increasing Correct subject-verb agreement
are
fastly
.But ,nowadays, Rephrase
fast
people
always contribute to reduce
these Change the verb form
reducing
problems
.while
, Other
side, Correct article usage
the Other
well -known
organizations should help to mitigate Correct your spelling
well-known
this
Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
problems
. I Verb problem
apply
am
partially agree with Unnecessary verb
apply
this
statement.
To begin
with, good
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a good
environment
give
good Change the verb form
gives
health
to people
. So, governments and big companies should impose strict rules and regulations to protect the atomshere
.Because good Correct your spelling
atmosphere
environment
puts
Verb problem
has
good
effect on Add an article
a good
people
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people's
health
and they can stay health
Replace the word
healthy
as well as
away from many diseases like Asthma. Big
Add an article
The big
industry
should install new machines for recycling the waste and should proper Fix the agreement mistake
industries
sawage
for Correct your spelling
sewage
savage
waste water
. Correct your spelling
wastewater
Apart from
this
, big
corporation should use solar energy, which Add an article
the big
a big
reduce
the Change the verb form
reduces
consuming
of fossil fuel. Replace the word
consumption
As a consequence
, it would be beneficial for both environment
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the environment
as well as
organization because they can save their
money by doing Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
.
On the other hand
, people
should maintain the area because many problems
occurs
from air and citizen should make Change the verb form
occur
team
and clean up their area and sort out trash collected in their area. It Correct article usage
a team
puts
Verb problem
has
Add an article
a
people
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people's
health
and environment
. When they work together Correct article usage
the environment
its
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it
also
enhance
affection toward each other Correct subject-verb agreement
enhances
as well as
improve
the quality of life. Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
People
get chance
to learn new Correct article usage
a chance
thing
when they work in Fix the agreement mistake
things
team
.
Add an article
a team
To sum up
, government
should impose strict Add an article
the government
law
related to Fix the agreement mistake
laws
atmosphere
.the big companies should organize the seminar. which Add an article
the atmosphere
provide
the knowledge about Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
environment
. Citizen
should make Fix the agreement mistake
Citizens
committee
and do meeting Fix the agreement mistake
committees
time
to time Change preposition
from time
for reducing
Change preposition
to reduce
the
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apply
environment
waste.Replace the word
environmental
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