The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram delineates the information of the process required for manufacturing
of
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olive
oil
from the
stratch
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scratch
stretch
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that
makig
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making
of olive
oil
is a
six step
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process followed by
the
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storage and
transportations
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. To commence with, olives are selected directly from the trees and collected into
number
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a number
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of
basket
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. These selected olives are rinsed with the help of cold water. These rinsed olives, with the help of
belt
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, moved to the
cyclindrical
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cylindrical
container. In
this
container, smashing is done. After smashing two by-products are formed, one is olive paste,
while
another one is olive stones. The formed olive paste is transferred to the bags with holes. After
transfering
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transferring
, bags are pressed by putting some help weight on the top of
bag
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the bag
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. After pressing is done,
sepration
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separation
will take place in which
oil
and water will be separated.
This
oil
is transported to
local
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the local
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market for storage and sale.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Harvesting - the process of collecting ripe fruits, such as olives, from trees.
  • Rinsing - washing thoroughly with water to clean away debris or impurities.
  • Crushing - smashing or grinding something into small pieces or a paste.
  • Paste - a thick, soft mixture formed by crushing olives.
  • Pressing - the act of applying force to extract liquid.
  • Centrifuge - a machine that separates substances of different densities by spinning them rapidly.
  • Filtering - the process of removing impurities or unwanted particles from a liquid.
  • Bottling - packaging liquid in bottles for storage or sale.
  • Impurities - unwanted or foreign substances within a mixture.
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